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M.Yu. ULermontov "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqeni": ukuhlaziywa kwenkondlo
Izwi likaLermontov liyi-diary ekhethekile yombhalo lapho umbhali akwazi ukukhombisa ngokugcwele imizwa yakhe kanye nokuhlangenwe nakho kwakhe. Umsebenzi wendlovu uhlukaniswe ngezikhathi ezimbili: ekuqaleni nangasekupheleni. Kuzo zonke zazo, lezi zizathu noma ezinye izisusa zithintekile, zibonakala ngendlela yazo. Enye yezinto eziqhakazile kakhulu ezenziwa uLermontov kwakuwukuthi "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqweni." Ukuhlaziywa kwenkondlo kubonisa ukuthi umbono wezwe wembongi ushintshile kangakanani eminyakeni yobudala (nakuba wayeneminyaka engama-25 nje kuphela!), Futhi nokuthi uhlelo lwakhe lwezinkondlo luphikisiwe kanjani.
Isihloko nombono wenkondlo
Isihloko esiyinhloko somsebenzi isizungu. Lokhu kungaqondwa kusukela emgqeni wokuqala. Phela, ihhashi eliyingqayizivele "lilodwa". Kodwa-ke, okungajwayelekile njengoba kungase kubonakale, akukho isihlamba emphakathini kule nkondlo. Zonke izinsolo nokufutheka zahlala esikhathini esidlule, ezinkondlweni zakuqala zenkondlo. Lapha sibona ukuzindla okuzolile, kucabanga esikhathini esidlule. Inkondlo kaMnu Yu Lermontov "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqweni" iqukethe umqondo olandelayo: i-lonely hero, njenge lyric, ithole induduzo kuphela yedwa ngemvelo. Umqondo ofanayo usuvele uzwakala eLermontov nangaphambili, isibonelo, emsebenzini "Uma insimu ye-yellowing ikhathazekile." Ukuqonda kangcono incazelo yenkondlo, udinga ukwenza ukuhlaziywa okuningiliziwe.
ULermontov "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqweni": ukuhlaziywa kwesithombe
Umsebenzi unomthelela ojulile ngokomzwelo. Ngamanye ama-stanzas ulandela umqondo oyinhloko womsebenzi.
Esigabeni sokuqala, umbhali uletha hero yakhe eqondile phambili, ebonisa ukuthi uhlukile kwabanye abantu. Isithombe esizungezile i-hero kuyinto ebusuku, ihlane, izinkanyezi. Lezi yizithombe ezidala isizinda esiyinhloko futhi usethe umfundi kumzwelo ofunayo wokuzindla. Emvelweni, konke kuvumelana, kuthulile futhi kuzolile, kuyo "inkanyezi eneenkanyezi ithi." Ngakho-ke, yini ezungeza imbongi, isihawukela naye. Zonke izimo zemvelo zingakwazi ukubona imicabango kanye nokuhlangenwe nakho komuntu.
Kodwa kwenzekani emphefumulweni weqhawe? Isigaba sesibili siqala ukusingenisa kahle ezweni langaphakathi le heroy lyric. "Ubuhlungu futhi bunzima." Emphefumulweni wakhe womphefumulo, akakwazi ukuthola imibono yakhe.
Esigabeni sesithathu yena ngokwakhe uphendula imibuzo yakhe. Akalindele lutho oluthile ekuphileni, akazisoli esikhathini esidlule. Ucindezelwe kuphela ngokuthi akazizwa ephumula. Yini ekhona yeLermontov? Lesi esinye isithombe esibalulekile kuwo wonke umsebenzi wezinkondlo. ULermontov ubona ukuthula ngendlela ekhethekile. Lokhu akusilo "iphupho elibandayo lethuna," hhayi ukungahlali okuqhubekayo. I hero idinga ukuthula kwengqondo, lapho, noma kunjalo, kuyoba nemizwa kanye nezinkanuko. Singacabanga ukuthi konke okunye kweLermontov kuyinkulumo efana negama elithi "injabulo."
Kusho ukuveza kahle
Ama-metaphor, ama-epithets, ama-personalifications kanye nokuhlukumezeka ahluke ohlwini oluphelele lwezindlela zokubonisa ukusebenzisana kwe-Lermontov. "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqweni" (ukuhlaziywa kuqinisekisa lokhu) - inkondlo lapho izindlela zokuziveza zikhona. Kodwa singathola futhi ama-lexical.
Esigabeni sokuqala, umbhali ukhuluma ngemvelo, amnike izimfanelo zabantu. Izinkanyezi zikhuluma komunye nomunye, umhlaba ngokwawo ulele. Le nqubo ibonisa umbono wezwe wembongi. Kuye, umuntu kanye nemvelo akwazi ukuhlukaniswa. Kodwa imvelo ihlakaniphile kakhulu uma iqhathaniswa nomuntu, futhi ngaphandle kwalokho, ingunaphakade.
Esigabeni sesibili, umbhali ubuza imibuzo ephikisayo. Awudingi izimpendulo, ngoba ngisho neqhawe lezingoma azikwazi ukuthola.
Esigabeni sesithathu, "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqweni," uMnu. Lermontov usebenzisa ukuphindaphinda kwe-lexical ukuxhumanisa izingcezu ezihlukahlukene zenkondlo. Kukhona futhi ukuhlanganiswa kokuhlanganiswa.
Emigqeni emine engapheli, sithola i-anaphora kanye nokulinganisa ("Ngakho amandla okuphila ahlezi esifubeni, ukuze isifuba singaphefumula, siphefumule kancane").
Kusukela ku-lexical izindlela (ngaphezu kokuzenzela umuntu) kungenzeka ukuthi uqale igama elithi epithets: "izwi elimnandi", "i-oak omnyama".
Isigqi nesimiso
Usayizi wezinkondlo u-trochee ezinemilenze emihlanu. Uhlinzeka umsebenzi ngesigqi esikhethekile, kuzwakala umsindo, into efana ne-elegy. Indlela yomlolotolo, okushiwo uLermontov, iyadlula. Umlolotha wesifazane uhamba nendoda.
Umsebenzi onjalo ozolile, ozindla ubonakala uncharacteristic emsebenzini kaLermontov. Kodwa-ke, wonke amazwi akhe asekupheleni abonisa ukuthi imbongi ikhule. Ezinkondlweni zakhe awekho maximalism yentsha, inqatshelwe izinyathelo ezingamatshumi amabili, ukuphika ngamandla futhi inselele emphakathini.
UMikhail Lermontov: "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqweni" kumongo womsebenzi womlobi
Lo mbhalo ungabizwa ngokuthi ukugcina, uletha isici esithile ngaphansi kwakho konke okudalwe uLermontov. "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqeni" (ukuhlaziywa kokuqukethwe nesimo kufakazela ukuthi) "Uma inkambu ye-yellowing ikhathazekile." Kakade kulo mlobi ukhuluma ngamandla amakhulu emvelo, ukuthi kuhle kangakanani. Imvelo ivumelanisa ukungezwani emphefumulweni weqhawe, imvumela ukuba abheke umhlaba ngendlela ehlukile, ubone uNkulunkulu ezulwini. "Ngiyahamba ngedwa emgwaqweni" uMnu Yu Lermontov njengesiyonke akuyona into engavamile. Kulokho futhi isisusa sobumuntu obunesizungu kulo lonke umsebenzi wezinkondlo, ukushiwo ukungahambisani nomphakathi, ukuthi uyakhethiwe, hhayi umuntu ovamile.
Indlela yokuhlaziya kahle inkondlo?
Ukuze uhlaziye kahle umbhalo oqoshiwe, udinga ukulandela uhlelo olucacile. Ukuqala ukwakheka kwakho kungcono ngamazwi wendaba kanye nomqondo womsebenzi. Khona-ke udinga ukusho ngokugcwalisa ngokomzwelo umbhalo. Uma sikhuluma ngenkondlo ethi "Ngiyahamba yedwa emgwaqweni" uMnu Yu Lermontov, khona-ke lesi simo sengqondo sizindla, sidabukisayo.
Futhi iphuzu elibalulekile ukuhlaziywa kwezindlela ezibucayi nezindlela zokwenza kahle, ngezibonelo ezisuka embhalweni. Kumele kukhunjulwe ukuthi konke ukusetshenziswa komfanekiso kunencazelo yalo, ngakho-ke kufanele kuboniswe.
Okulandelayo, udinga ukuveza i-lyric hero. Ungaqhathanisa neminye imisebenzi yomlobi ukukhombisa ukuthi ijaji lendabuko noma, ngokuphambene nalokho, engavamile.
Into yokugcina ongayisho ngalokhu yimizwa ebangela umbhalo, futhi unikeze ukulinganisela kwakho.
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