Indaba uhlelo "undlunkulu singcolile." "Undlunkulu singcolile" Paustovsky

Kuzo zonke Anthology esikoleni kwezincwadi kuhlanganisiwe indaba "undlunkulu singcolile" (Paustovsky). Loluhlelo kwendaba kanye imithetho ekuwulungiseleleni kuxoxwa ngokuningiliziwe kulesi sihloko, ngoba umsebenzi ekusizeni izingane ekufundzela kuvisisa nguthishela. Nakuba yabhalwa ngo-1948, ayizange ilahleke ngokuhlathulula ukusebenza kwawo, nakuba lezi zenzakalo ezichazwe zenzeka esikhathini post-yimpi. Ukugcwaliseka kwazo kwenkathi musa overload umkhiqizo futhi musa akusibekele okushiwoyo.

"Undlunkulu singcolile": isifinyezo

Loluhlelo iqala ngesingeniso mayelana netheksthi. nakanjani wayo kudingeka ufunde umthombo oyinhloko, ngoba retellings zabanye abantu kungenzeka zingalungi, futhi ikhathuni eponymous, njengoba umsebenzi okhethekile yobuciko, ngokuzithandela udlulisa okuqukethwe.

Indaba - uhlobo izincwadi, njalo etshela ngezenzakalo. He is ngokuvamile yayincane, kungaba lapho zibhekene nomsebenzi, ngisho nezingane esikoleni samabanga aphansi. Ngo umkhiqizo K.Paustovsky "undlunkulu singcolile", okuyinto uhlelo izokwethulwa esihlokweni uchaza izenzakalo nomndeni wentombazane ngegama kaMariya.

Ubaba wakhe kuyinto eNhlonhlweni eKamchatka, ekhaya, umama siphela dancer ngesikhathi yaseshashalazini wendawo. Ngesikhathi kudlalwé "Cinderella," okokuqala uye wathembisa ukuba ngithathele indodana nge zilaliswe umzanyana. Ikhumbule umyeni wakhe ukuba umdlali yayilungiselela pin ku wakhe umenzele isipho - ingilazi isixha sezimbali intshontshiwe engaqondile zafinyelela indodakazi iqhude. Ukusiza intombazane ocindezelekile oza undlunkulu, kanye Masha is usindiswe ngosuku ebusika elambile. Libuyela into eyigugu kwesokudla ngesikhathi show ngokubiza ngaso umama imoto nezinyembezi zenjabulo emehlweni akhe.

Umkhiqizo eyinhloko ukuhlaziywa: uhlobo

Ngemva kokufunda umbhalo, kuyinto efiselekayo ucabange izinto ngokuqonda lokho kwaziswa. Phakathi kwabo:

• Uyini uhlobo umsebenzi?
• Ngobani izinhlamvu zakhe eziyinhloko?
• Yini umbhali ufuna ukutshela?
• Yiziphi izingxenye semantic bungabonakala okuqukethwe?

Ukuze wenze indaba "undlunkulu singcolile" uhlelo, phendula chungechunge imibuzo ezihlongozwayo. Ekuqaleni impendulo isivele inikezwe, kodwa umfundi ebhekene izakhi ezivumela ukuba sithwale umkhiqizo yezinganekwane:

• Sparrow uyaqonda inkulumo yomuntu futhi uyakwazi bayazwelana nabo.
• Life undlunkulu isizwe kakhulu efana wobuntu.
• Crow ecabanga namaphupho.

protagonists

Ngakho, ngemva kokufunda enye umsebenzi "undlunkulu singcolile" (Paustovsky). Indaba uhlelo akunakwenzeka ngaphandle kuvisisa ngubani protagonist umsebenzi. izinhlamvu Real abathintekayo izenzakalo ezimbalwa. Lena ongumama, ezithela phezu kwalowaya mhlengikazi, iphoyisa, kodwa esonta ngesakhiwo emhlabeni kwentombazanyana Masha, okusikisela ukuthi umlingiswa oyinhloko kwaba wakhe.

Tale like ngokuphila ukuphila ezimele ngaphakathi indaba, kodwa futhi unalo uhlamvu yayo siqu - undlunkulu, okufakazela igama lomkhiqizo. Umbhali uhlale zilalele isihloko, ngokuletha ngokusebenzisa umcondvo lomcoka endzabeni kanye amehlo umfundi.

Umqondo oyinhloko: lokho umbhali ufuna ukutshela?

Sencazelo "singcolile" ngephutha ephawula undlunkulu omncane. Ngakolunye uhlangothi, uma yenza ukunyakaza futhi kukhulisa ijubane imicimbi, ngakolunye - libonisa impi, impi nezimvu, obulandela ukwengamela zokulungisa Masha kancane. Sparrow okuthiwa Pasha ufuna ukubonga intombazane ukophula kwakhe okuyisimangaliso, enza izinto onamandla kunayo yesifiso sakhe. Lavelaphi wakhe?

Kusukela nakho, ukuthi ngaphandle umama ingilazi Amahlumela awukhumbuli Pope phakathi ukusebenza, ngakho kungani wakhala enkulu eyayine ngayizolo. Mhlawumbe konke lokhu indaba mayelana nondlunkulu Pasha - a amaphupho intombazane uthando oluqinile unina ngakhothama ngokulila. Yilokho indaba K.Paustovsky "undlunkulu singcolile", okuyinto sizokwenza uhlelo.

Gqamisa izingxenye semantic

Ezixoxwa ngaphandle ekuhambisaneni isikhathi ukulandelana, ngakho ukwabiwa izingxenye semantic ngakho kudingeka kucatshangelwe. Ukuze ubhale uhlelo, udinga ukwakha lwendaba, futhi ngaleyo ndlela ukudala kabusha zonke izenzakalo ngokulandelana zenzeka ngempela. Indaba iqala lapho incazelo amahora nokuthi uMariya wema efasiteleni, kodwa kwandulelwe ukugunyazwa okwenziwe ngokuyisimangaliso insindiso undlunkulu ehlaselwe iqhude. Ngaphansi kokuqukethwe esikhathini esidlule, izenzakalo zamanje nezesikhathi esizayo, bungabonakala embhalweni izingxenye ezine:

• Umshini umndeni.
• Life undlunkulu Pasha.
• Imicimbi ezihlobene nokuntshontshwa amagatsha ingilazi.
• isixazululo esijabulisayo lesi simo.

Ukuze wenze indzaba lemfisha kuphindza acoce we plan "undlunkulu singcolile", kubalulekile ukuba bahlukanise ingxenye ngayinye ezincane (izigaba 2-3 ngokwencazelo yaleli) ngokuthola isihloko. Elungile ke niyobuthwa, kuba lula nokuzala okuqukethwe plan onjalo.

Part One: "Lo mkhaya imoto"

Indaba iqala lapho incazelo kusihlwa ebusika, egumbini lapho iwindi kufanele Masha. Zonke izinto zibonakala uyaphila: iwashi ezihambayo yensimbi smith, clinking imiqulu yabo egumbini, kanye Ukushisa ukulunguza ingoma efudumele. Le ntombazane wacabanga yini umama wakhe, wasina yaseshashalazini, mayelana Pope, owakhonza njengelungu itilosi, nezipho zakhe - isixha elincane ingilazi mncane. Umama wakhuluma naye, njengokungathi uyaphila, bese kwesokunxele etafuleni, wayala indodakazi yakhe ingamthinti izinto ethambile. Wayezothola ukugqoka ibhroshi ku kudlalwé "Cinderella."

Ngakho kancane osebenzisa indaba yomsebenzi wakhe K. G. Paustovsky ( "undlunkulu singcolile"). Plan ingxenye yokuqala indaba simiswe ngalendlela lelandzelako:

1. "Live" iwashi odongeni ntambama ebusika.
2. Indlu Mama sika.
3. UPapa Masha.
4. UMama ingilazi isixha.
5. iqhude Uchoko.

Ingxenye Yesibili: "Impilo undlunkulu Pasha"

Paustovsky uConstantine ( "undlunkulu singcolile") uchaza ukuphila igwababa ngendlela Itafula, lapho wayelokhu ngomnotho intshontshiwe, ukuwalondoloza kusukela ondlunkulu. Yena waphupha amaphupho esabekayo: ulahlekile wrappers eyithandayo kusukela emaswidi nezixhobo eqandisiwe umvimba. Wayekhala ebusuku, iphoyisa okwesabisayo. Izakhamizi ayisekho ukugibela CAB, futhi ukungabi khona oats ngesikhathi ondlunkulu kwafika nezikhathi ezinzima. Bona ayesanda ukuthola ukudla ngokwabo, ngakho Pasha yacwila ukuba iqhude ngendlela Itafula ethembeni inzuzo. Blow ekhanda Uqhwaku sasinamandla kangangokuthi undlunkulu zawa iqhwa.

Okungenzeka "undlunkulu singcolile" uhlelo indaba (Ingxenye yesibili):

1. Amagwababa endlini.
2. Life ondlunkulu ebusika.
3. Igwababa Caught Pasha.
4. Iphoyisa layilamula.
5. Insindiso ekhaya imoto.

Ingxenye Three: "Izenzakalo ezihlobene ukuntshontshwa Amahlumela ingilazi"

Usuku Masha Pasha waphuma endlini, kodwa nsuku zonke landizela futhi, ngoba walishiya imvuthu ngaye. Ukukubonga undlunkulu ukubuyiselwa le eyebiwe imvu ingcebo: izingcezu ikhekhe, candy wrappers ngisho isibungu. Ngaphambi ukuthi kwaba ubufakazi, njengoba iqhude ngefasitela weba ikhanda izinhlanzi. Ngesikhathi unesi wayelele, Maria wanquma ukulandela imvu wavula okuyingxenye phezulu ewindini, kufihlwe ngemuva lezingubo. inyoni Flown udonse ingilazi isixha kwesokunxele etafuleni. UMariya wayenokuphila isikhathi kuphela ukumemeza. Kusihlwa umama walila kabuhlungu, futhi nalo, waqhumuka wakhala izinyembezi and Masha. Ekuseni sigameko wathola Pasha.

Indaba uhlelo "undlunkulu singcolile" (ingxenye yesithathu) zingenziwa kanje:

1. ukubonga Pashkina.
2. Masha iphutha.
3. Khama iqhude ingilazi isixha.
4. Izindaba ukweba.
5. Indlela ebhayisikobho.

Ingxenye yesine: "Ukulungiswa elijabulisayo isimo"

Masha kusihlwa nenhle wahamba umhlengikazi on the show, futhi Pasha Baqala ukwenza. Waqoqa zonke ondlunkulu edolobheni, ukuze anqande eyigugu isipho Masha sika umama iqhude. Abangane baye basungula uhlelo ukuyenga izinyoni akhuluphalisiweyo. Lapho-ke ayisebenzanga, bona liphindelela baphuthuma idokodo, wenze real "Melee." Yebo, yokuthi kwadingeka ukuba kungenelele amaphoyisa kulo. Ngalesi sikhathi, izilaleli spellbound kulandela indaba Cinderella, ngisho izikhonzi abadala ayikwazanga ukuyisiza ukukhala buthule ukungena ehholo. Ngendlela enhle kakhulu dancing umama Masha sika eyindodakazi wozakwabo baka yabo. Phakathi enesiphetho esijabulisayo endaweni yesehlakalo ngokungazelelwe ezazinyakaziswa undlunkulu singcolile epheshaneni lehla ezandleni ingilazi kweqembu elincane Cinderella.

Manje, bhala sihlelele indzaba lemfisha "undlunkulu singcolile" (ingxenye yesine) akunzima:

1. Xoxa ondlunkulu nohlelo.
2. "Melee."
3. "Cinderella" yokuphumelela ukusebenza.
4. Buyela ingilazi isixha.
5. Izinyembezi zenjabulo.

ukubaluleka komkhiqizo

Kungani indaba wangena Anthology kwezincwadi? Ngoba kungcono ngemizwa kweqiniso. I-Glass kweqembu imigwaqo umama Masha, hhayi ngenxa yezindleko zayo okusezingeni eliphezulu. Kuyinto inkumbulo kothandekayo - imoto kayise. Njengoba itilosi, yena balwa ngesibindi phambili namaNazi, futhi sokuthula, waphayona eKamchatka ezikude. Wabuza unina ukuba athunge isixha imoto ingubo ngosuku i kwesizini kubalulekile wakhe ukuze aqiniseke ekhumbula ngaye. Kubalulekile ngakho - ukukhumbula umuntu othandekayo osukwini lwami abajabule kunabo bonke.

Umama, wabanjwa off ingxoxo nge kweqembu, ngikholelwa ukuthi indodakazi yakhe babengeke baqonde. It ubuhlungu intombazane, owayebonakala ukuthi sebekwazi ukuqonda imfihlakalo imizwa omdala futhi eyinkimbinkimbi yabo. Empeleni, uMariya nje ukufunda ukukuqonda kubo, sizibuza ukuthi kungani injabulo hhayi kuphela ukuhleka kodwa futhi ngikhale. Ukuphumelelisa injabulo jikelele lwenziwe Sibonga kungenzeka ukuba unakekelwe undlunkulu intombazanyana sika. Wakwenza ngokungenabugovu, elenza ucabangani mayelana nokubaluleka kokuba nomusa futhi acabangele abanye.

K.Paustovsky - umlobi emangalisayo, esizalela ngokusebenzisa izinhlamvu zakhe imizwa yangempela futhi imizwa, ngilandisa ukwethembeka, nokubonga futhi uthando lweqiniso. Wazalelwa phambi inguquko, wayehamba kakhulu futhi wabona izinhlekelele eziningi ngaphambili ekuphileni kwakhe. Ngisho ebusheni bakhe wafunda ubuhlungu. abazali wakhe wayenezingane ezine: indodakazi nabafowethu abathathu. Intsha nengxenye kweMpi Yezwe Yokuqala. Ngenxa yalokho, wasinda umzalwane kuphela Galina Paustovsky (GP) - uConstantine.

Indaba "undlunkulu Rastropany": plan of izingcaphuno kokwethula okokusebenza

uhlelo Simple ukwakha usekelo lwe kuphindza acoce kombhalo. Ngemibuzo esithuthuke kabanzana kanye nobufakazi-impendulo, Indzaba futhi isethulo nezingcaphuno kudingeka ukuhlela. It libhekene yokuthi okushiwo amazwibela umbhalo kukhona ngesimo acashuniwe, ukudlulisela umqondo oluyisisekelo ndima ngafaka zokucaphuna. Sebenzisa kuphela umbhalo ongokoqobo umsebenzi uqobo. uhlelo "undlunkulu singcolile" indaba enjalo ngeke neqhaza ekuthuthukiseni yokukhuluma. Njengoba isibonelo, cabanga uhlelo yento "Uchoko iqhude." Ngesimo izingcaphuno uyobheka kanje: "The Raven yambamba into yokuqala elafika kwesinye isandla, futhi ... ukuthi galo yephuka."

Lapho efeza umsebenzi lungahlanganiswa izingxenye semantic. Khona-ke sithola lokhu okulandelayo:

1. "UMariya wema efasiteleni."
2. "Umama ... ngomumo ukudansa okokuqala Cinderella."
3. "Umama wathatha ingilazi enze isixha sezimbali."
4. "Raven ezitholakala Itafula kwawona lowo ndlunkulu omncane singcolile okuthiwa Pasha".
5. "Masha Pasha alethwe ekhaya."
6. "Pasha wayecabanga ... kuka ukubonga Masha."
7. "Raven ... walibamba isixha namabhodlela landizela efasiteleni."
8. "Pasha ... wezwa indaba mayelana isixha intshontshiwe."
9. "Njengoba ondlunkulu ... waqala ngamunye ngamunye ukuze agxumele e kwesibaya."
10. "Kuphelile umbukiso. Sparrow epheshaneni ... waphonsa crystal isixha elincane ".
11. "Kusukela insini kancane injabulo, futhi kusukela ezinkulu -. Ukukhala"

Ngakho, ukuze kulungiselelwe kahle uhlelo kwendaba, kumele wena:

• Funda umbhalo.
• Hlukanisa kwawo izingxenye, ukukhomba umcondvo lobalulekile ndima.
• Ilungelo kuye.
• Hlola futhi urekhode.